I received positive and useful feedback from my reviewers, I plan to revise my narrative by going through and fixing a lot of the grammatical errors. Carley had mentioned in her review that I had good use of descriptions she liked that I used a picture as a footnote. She recommended that I should spend more time describing the Ranch and that I should add in some more descriptive details. I am definitely going to take her opinions into consideration while finishing my paper. She also enjoyed the diary entries that I had written so I am going to try and keep going with the flow of adding an entry and then going more in depth with the information.
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